TOEFL шалгалтын нэг том зүйл нь???
Sain baitsgaana uu, zaluusaa!
TOEFL-iin shalgaltiin neg tom zuil ni essay bichih buguud ene ni mongolchuud bidnii
huvid uneheer hund davaa baidgiig TOEFL ugsun, uguhuur beltgej baigaa hun buhen medne.
Oyutan baihad maani manai neg amerik bagsh bid nart neg sedev uguud essay bicihiig
daalgavar bolgoson yum. Tegeed bichsen bolgoniig maani ulaan ereen bolgood bugdeeren
deer ni free writing gej temdegleed, dooguur ni zurchihsan baij bilee. Bi lav dor hayaj
ter sedveer 3 bicheed gurvuuland ni adilhan l iim hariu avsan sanagdana. Eyr ni bi ch
bish bugd l…
2002 ond bi TOEFL-iin kurst surch baihdaa sursan, essay bichihed anhaarah “altan durem”
-iig tun tovchhon,bas oilgomjtoi hurgehiig zoriloo.
Wait a minute! There should be a warm up first (bagshaar suraltsaj baihdaa zaalgasan
yum 
). Tegeed ch iimerhuu baidlaar sursan zuil hurdan togtoj, udaan hadgalagddag sh
dee.
Medlegt dusal nemer gedeg. 9 garigiig angliar tugdrelgui nerlej surtsgaaya. But, HOW?
Here’s the trick.
My Very Educated Mother Just Showed Us Nine Planets.
9 ugtei uguulber. Gehdee ug buhen tomoor ehelsniig anzaarsan uu. YUP.
M-Mercury, V-Venus, E-Earth, M-Mars, J-Jupiter, S-Saturn, U-Uranus,
N-Neptune, and P-Pluto.
ESSAY
INTRODUCTION.
1. Hook-grabs the readers attention. Could be: a. Question (you can ask the question)
again. b. Generalization (make a common sense statement). c. Personalization (say
like ..In my opinion…etc)
2. Connecting Info. (maybe you can show advantages and disadvantages…can be varous)
3. Thesis sentence. (main idea of entire assay)
A BODY.
1. Topic sentence. (main idea of the paragraph)
2. Supporting sentence. (general)
3. Supporting sentence. (specific)
4. Transitional. (transit smoothly to the next)
B BODY.
1. Topic sentence.
2. Supporting sentence. (evidence and examples)
3. Supporting sentence. (details)
4. Concluding.
CONCLUSION.
1. Restated thesis. (direct or indirect)
2. Revelation. (opinion, prediction, suggestoin…)
Odoo ene durmee jisheegeer bayajuulj uzye.
HOOK.
a. Q=Is studying alone better?
b. G=Studying is important for students.
c. P=Being a student, studying is important to me.
CONNECTING INFO.
Studying alone has both advantages and disadvantages.
THESIS STATEMENT.
(direct) I prefer studying alone because of the concentration, the efficiency,
and the personal benefits.
(indirect) I prefer studying alone for several reasons.
BODY PARAGRAPH.
a. Studying alone leads to heightered concentration.
b. If a student is alone, he/she will not be distracted by friends or unrelated
events.
c. When I have to study for a test, I always go to the library and look for a quiet,
out-of-the-way corner to do my work.
d. The concentration attained, however, is not ….
CONCLUSION.
a. Though, I understand that some prefer group study, studying alone seems to work
best for me.
b. If I continue to study alone, I will pass all of my exams…
Za neg iimerhuu baidlaar bichvel boloh bolov uu gej bodoj baina. Baga ch atugai uurt
chini tus bolbol minii suuj bichsenii ur dun garah ni teree.
Good luck!
Suugii
Thank you for sharing your knowledge with us.I like your post. Especially, the information about structure of essay. It is really helpful for memorizing main concept of writing. In addition to your post I would like to say that introduction and conclusion must be connected in some way. Let’s say that you have got in worst situation and you can’t connect introduction with conclusion. Meanwhile, time is running… What would be your action? Don’t think too deep. If there is no time to think just copy the introduction and put it in conclusion.
guest
December 9, 2007
Hey sain uu Suugii, Tsag zavaa gargan heregtei medeelel oruulsand bayarlalaa.
Yum nemeh gesen eruusuu olddogui shuu. Minii medeh yum duuslaa gedeg shig…
Aan tiim ene essay-d chini transitional word & phrase (sanaag hoorond ni holboh, zohion baiguulalttai bolgohod heregleh ugnuud) gedeg chin estoi chuhal ed baidag yum bilee. Ene door bi jishee bolgoj hediig tavilaa http://www.studygs.net/wrtstr6.htm – ene linknees avlaa.
Addition:
also, again, as well as, besides, coupled with, furthermore, in addition, likewise, moreover, similarly
Consequence:
accordingly, as a result, consequently, for this reason, for this purpose,
hence, otherwise, so then, subsequently, therefore, thus, thereupon,wherefore
Generalizing:
as a rule, as usual, for the most part,
generally, generally speaking, ordinarily, usually
Exemplifying:
chiefly, especially, for instance, in particular, markedly, namely,
particularly, including, specifically, such as
Illustration:
for example, for instance, for one thing, as an illustration,
illustrated with, as an example, in this case
Emphasis
above all, chiefly, with attention to, especially, particularly, singularly
Similarity:
comparatively, coupled with, correspondingly, identically, likewise, similar, moreover, together with
Exception:
aside from, barring, besides, except, excepting, excluding, exclusive of, other than, outside of, save
Restatement:
in essence, in other words, namely, that is, that is to say,
in short, in brief, to put it differently
Contrast and Comparison:
contrast, by the same token, conversely, instead, likewise,
on one hand, on the other hand, on the contrary, rather,
similarly, yet, but, however, still, nevertheless, in contrast
Sequence:
at first, first of all, to begin with, in the first place, at the same time,
for now, for the time being, the next step, in time, in turn, later on,
meanwhile, next, then, soon, the meantime, later, while, earlier,
simultaneously, afterward, in conclusion, with this in mind,
Summarizing:
after all, all in all, all things considered, briefly, by and large, in any case, in any event,
in brief, in conclusion, on the whole, in short, in summary, in the final analysis,
in the long run, on balance, to sum up, to summarize, finally
Diversion:
by the way, incidentally
Direction:
here, there, over there, beyond, nearly, opposite, under, above,
to the left, to the right, in the distance
mglman
December 9, 2007
Hi oruulsan zuiluud chin eroosoo unshigahgui jijig bn
Tomi
December 9, 2007
Nadad lav zugeer garch baina.
Anonymous
December 10, 2007
Tani yavuulsan sanaa bolon medeelel nadad ix chuxal zuiluudiig xelj ogloo. Tsaashid ch gsn iim xeregtei medeeleluudiig bainga ogch bgaarai.Bayarlalaa.
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December 20, 2007
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